Ahh, yes dear lady.

Ahh, yes dear lady. The first paragraph put me right in the palace.  Well done!  

Sometimes life gets in the way and you set aside a book. I would have to go back and reread at least one previous chapter.  

Not with yours!

I can see the rain falling.  I can smell the dampness.  I’m in the palace.

Then the excitement, hoping they don’t get caught…